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Winter's gone , we are studying the Analytical Writing Assessment (AWA) task of the GMAT. Questions used are all from the Pool of Sample Topics available in the Official Guide. Be prepared for that some of the questions will look familiar when you actually take the test.
Now, we will be reading the question:
「Question No. 88」
The following appeared in an ad for a book titled How to Write a Screenplay for a Movie:
“Writers who want to succeed should try to write film screenplays rather than books, since the average film tends to make greater profits than does even a best-selling book. It is true that some books are also made into films. However, our nation’s film producers are more likely to produce movies based on original screenplays than to produce films based on books, because in recent years the films that have sold the most tickets have usually been based on original screenplays.”
Introduction
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Body
以三个逻辑疑点为例,示范关于逻辑疑点的讨论/写作
First, the comparison between a book and a screenplay makes no sense, ← 首先,直接指出疑点的核心。然后,具体分析我质疑的原因 → because of the argument’s lack of information regarding how the royalty of a best-selling book is calculated and regarding how that of a screenplay is calculated. A writer of a screenplay may be paid a tiny portion of the profits the film generates, and the tiny portion maybe less than the generous royalty a writer may be paid from the sales of a best-selling book, although the book is less profitable than the film.【常见逻辑疑点:偷换概念。】
Second, it is likely that a writer who writes books gets paid both from the publication of their books and the production of films based on their books, while a writer of screenplays only benefits from one source of income, which is the screenplays alone. Since the double-income may be greater than the single-income, writing books may be more financially beneficial. 【常见逻辑疑点:多个变量问题。】
小总结:写作中的两种常用句型三,
是“可能性”句型(关键词被黄色高亮标出)
Lastly, since success includes a wide range of achievements, including financial gains, winning awards, intellectual or artistic influence, and sociocultural status, writers who want to succeed in terms of fame may not write screenplays, which may bring good economic rewards but may bring little fame. 【常见逻辑疑点:范畴问题】
其它逻辑疑点提示:
【常见逻辑疑点:偷换概念。】
【常见逻辑疑点:时间问题:提示词:in recent years】
【常见逻辑疑点:地点问题:提示词:our nations’】
Conclusion
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