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Some people think young people are more suitable to be leaders rather than old people.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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学生写道如下一句: I believe that elder people are more suitable to be leaders than young people with two reasons. * be suitable to be leaders这个表达繁琐了。 * 更idiomatic的表达习惯时for two reasons。 * with (with更正为for) two reasons放在句子最后面不太好。不知道是用来修饰I believe的还是用来修饰elder people are more suitable的。因为,要么是“我的详细是出于两个原因”,要么是“年长的人更合适是出于两个原因”。 看下面 教师修改意见: I believe that for two reasons elder people are more suited for leadership positions. 或者 For two reasons, I believe that elder people are more suited for leadership positions. * 解决了上面的分析中的问题。 * 同时把suitable换成suited。人作为主语去适合岗位的时候,用suited更idiomatic。 * be suited for leadership positions符合“人作为主语去适合岗位”的搭配要求。 小总结: * 状语的位置有讲究,不然意思不或者有歧义。 * 有些词汇有idiomatic的用法,靠语言经验积累。 * “适合领导角色/领导岗位”比“适合当领导”好听些吧。
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