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如何利用托福写作范文抓住得分点

新航道
2013-03-04 00:00:00

  托福写作主要考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握,以及逻辑和结构构架能力,一篇好的托福写作范文能够帮助同学们抓住托福写作的得分点,并能给大家提供提供高分词汇和句式。下面,我们就来看一篇托福写作范文:名人效应。

 
Whenfamouspeoplegivetheiropinions,manypeoplelisten.Shouldwepayattentiontothoseremarks?
 
 
  WhenTomCruiseonceappearedinaTVprogram,hewastooexcitedsohejumpedupanddownthecouch.Later“jumpthecouch”wasadoptedintheAmericandictionaryforslang.Thisisabitexaggerating,butitdefinitelyreflectsthefactthatwhenfamouspeoplegivetheiropinions,manypeoplelisten.But,shouldwepayattentiontotheseremarksoractions?
 
 
  Firstly,famouspeopleare“famous”,fortheyhaveoneorfewaspectsthatexceedcommonpeople.LikeAlbertEinsteinoncesaid,“Ithinkandthinkformonths,foryears,ninety-ninetimestheconclusionfalse,butthehundredthtimeIamright.”Asabrilliantscientist,hespeaksoftherightattitudestowardsscienceandinspirescountlesspeopletofightforthetruth.Hollywoodactorsoractresses,theymaytalkabouttheirdressingstylesorskincaresonmagazine.Thesearealladvicethatwemightaswelltake,forreallifeisnotjustseriousacademicthingsbutalsothesatisfactionofliving.
 
 
  Butthepointisthat,celebritiesarenotperfectrolemodelsforthepublic.OnceIheardastoryaboutEinstein,sayingthathenearlygotintothewaterwhenheonceharassedayoungladyandgotrefusedwhentheywereinaboatinapark.IsEinsteinevilsomehow?No!He’sjustbeinghuman.Thenisitwrongtoharassladies?Yes.Butallhumansmakemistakes.Celebritiesareexpertsincertainareasbutnotall.Insomeotherfields,theyshouldevenlearnfromus.
 
 
  Generally,therearetwoextremeswhentalkingaboutcelebrities:thepublicareeithertoocriticalortoosuperstitious.Objectively,bothoftheattitudesareunnecessary.AsaChinesesayingwhichgeneralizesthissituationthebestgoes:totakeinthegood,whiletogetridofthebad.
 
 
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