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真题解析:
Some people think that computers and the Internet are important in children’s study, but others think students can learn more effectively in schools and with teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
看到这道题目,你是否还想使用这个开头:
Nowadays, more and more children like to study on the internet….
又或者:
There has been much debate on whether ……
这样的开头已经OUT了!
今天教大家一个全新的开头模式:
使用短语:Conflicts arises when...(雅思写作精品exclusive珍藏开头段)
意思为是“当....../ 争论由此产生…”
高分演示
The first段
第1句:引出题干中的争议
Conflicts arises when many students tend to study in front of computers and on the internet or others still prefer studying in schools and with teachers.
第2句:引出自己的态度
In some cases,technologies could better fuel students’ desire and passion for their study.
加分理由
核心亮点1:第1句中没有使用传统的Nowadays,更没有more and more people
核心亮点2:第2句没有僵硬地使用However, I think…而是自然地表达了自己的态度,使用In some cases做衔接。
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