雅思写作范文

　　Task 2

　　In recent years, responsible tourists have paid attention to preserve both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

　　Are tourists able to conserve both culture and environment of various tourist attractions? The answer is apparently positive. Not only can they make subtle changes but they can be the savior.

　　★实意词的感情色彩：由小词到大词的转变在暗示读者后文作者可能要有个递进关系；

　　★ 典型的“八股”开头段方式行文进展特别慢，容易消耗读者的耐心。→开门见山，直接暗示读者笔者的行文立场可能是什么？索性句话就告诉我们的读者文本的写作立场是“旅客可以负责任地拯救environment and culture”

　　The inability of normal tourists to preserve culture and nature is understandable. Specifically, when journeying to a novel resort, a tourist is less likely to stay for a long time. This means that (s)he can barely address the cultural impacts and environmental damages even if (s)he craves for doing so, considering the severity of such thorny issues. In this sense, the impossibility endorsed by some does make sense. However, just as Rome is not established within one day, we can never expect these big problems resolved completely overnight. Visitors can also make a huge difference as long as they are highly motivated and determined.

　　★如果你已经厌倦了常见的说理、举例的论证方式，那么你可能需要借助修辞的魔力。如，用典（allusion）;

　　★动词的使用要有“灵动”的感觉哈；

　　As a matter of fact, individual efforts can help reap a bumper harvest. →To commence, some environmental burden can be alleviated by individuals. When we stop littering and even consciously pick up the plastic bottlesscattered over the natural landscape, we are saving the environment. Likewise, every time we refrain from using private cars to reach a destination within walking distance and instead choose to walk there, we do not leave a footprint on our Mother Nature by minimizing the carbon emissions. Besides, tourists can also launch some educational campaigns that call on the general public to put an end to graffiti and vandalism in historical relics. Such active propaganda, to some degree, protects our cultural assets from being undermined.

　　★ 如果你已经厌倦了常见的说理、举例的论证方式，那么类比（analogy）你一定要学习一番；

　　★还记得新闻报道的那位去西安旅游掰断兵马俑手指的外国人嘛？这种行为属于严重的破坏公物（文物）罪了！热点词vandalism and graffiti你可不能不会呀！

　　★ 动词的使用要有“灵动”的感觉哈；

　　At this point, the conclusion is quite crystal-clear. People can become responsible travelers in the ways of online and offline contributions.

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