应对
Research says more and more business training and business meeting taking place online.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
这道题目
考生在开头是这样写的
These days, more people are having business training and meetings online as there are many benefits. Many supporters, including me, agree with this opinion.
教师修改后如下
Some people think that it is better for business training and meeting to take place face-to-face rather than online. However, I feel that there are numerous benefits to conferencing over the Internet and, therefore, that the benefits of doing so outweigh the disadvantages.
☆ 表态时，推荐考生呈现一个完整清晰的句子，而非短促的指代
☆ 两个宾语从句I feel that … and that … 并列时，第二个that不可以省略
☆ conference 举行(或参加)会议 vi.
