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如何描述【比较】关系

2013 VS 2003，相对靠后的时间比较于更早的时间。

两种写作写作思路：1）先简单描述更早的时间，再着重描述靠后的时间。2）直接描述靠后的时间，同时与靠前的时间进行比较。

Depicted in the pies are the change in the proportion of New Zealand’s online sales of retail sectors. Overall, people paid more on entertainment in 2013 than they used to do. 

1. The year of 2013 saw a situation vastly different from that of 2003. 

2. In 2013, film and music accounted for roughly one third of the total, an increased share compared with 2003’s portion (one-fifth). 

3. This largest sector  was in marked contrast with clothing, which had a shrunken share in 2013 as the percentage decreased by eight points and to sixteen. 

定语从句内部有状语从句。

整体采用“总（笼统）——分（具体）”。

1. A proportional drop also occurred to the sales of travel. 

2. In 2013, travel was no longer the largest sector, and the proportion was approximately 30%, smaller than that of 2003 by 6%. 

3. Lastly, there was no considerable change in the sales of books, whose share stayed at around one-fifth despite a decrease. 

定语从句内部有状语。

前2句采用“总（笼统）——分（具体）”。

In general, the variation between the two years was apparent. 

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