托福写作：制胜法宝的例子怎么写才能披荆斩棘？

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　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

　　Movies and televisions should always show audience that good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished.

　　开头段快速切入主题！

　　It is always the case that [主语从句] in films or TV series the protagonists usually split into two sides: the kind and the evil. Here comes the cliché that the good always beats the bad even filled with the flower and applause. Well, does this long-existing plot guide viewers into a right path? My answer is no.【用设问引出文章话题并陈述自己立场】

　　抓住论题的要害进行论证！

　　First, the stereotype would undoubtedly spoil people’s interest in binge-watching. If the following scenarios had no difficulty for people to anticipate, viewers would [虚拟语气] never hesitate to drop off and dramatically downsize the rating, the lifeblood of any medium.【解释说明对观众的影响】 Inevitably, the repetitive ending is throttling fresh ideas, which is expected by any audience when they choose a program. 【解释说明对媒体的影响】No one would [倒装结构] appeal to the plot all in the same key. This can be best exemplified by the superhero series—Avengers. It is less welcomed by today’s cinemagoers and is no longer the best box-office draw since people are fed up with the foreseeable future. Sometimes, we even keep checking the progress bar to expect the end of boring fighting as Captain America can always win no matter how many stumbling blocks are on his journey.【用正例对说理进行补充】 The tone is the same in Ironman series and that is why people are extremely astonished and surprised when he died in the finale—Endgame. 【再用反例增强举例论证】

　　对自己的论点进行论述后用让步过渡！

　　Admittedly, the so-called happy ending symbolizes an ideal value for most audience especially to the young children. They are at the important stage to form a righteous concept that the devil must bear the sanction and the justice will be victorious. Hardly can [倒装结构]any teenager be mature enough to accept the shocking idea on the opposite. However, to the majority of viewers engaged in social life,【反驳论证：少数→多数】such ending tends to be more too idealistic to reflect the reality in actual world. To be more specific, long exposed to these utopian scenes, people would be obsessed with the naïve thought and be reluctant to encounter ugly truth.

　　余下部分略。

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